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depression, hope, Loneliness, love, poem, poetry, struggle
I am your doing,,
I am your creation,,,
Reduce me to nothing but ruin
Leave nothing but the foundation
Ruins are destined to be buried
For time is forever unkind
I am neither bothered nor worried
Preservation I don’t mind
These dunes are climbing my wall
Soon they will reach the top
I pray before the reaper call
The right one digs me up
Walk and never look back
I will hold my ground
Happiness might never come back
But I will come around
Let the stars be my lights
Let the sun warm my skin
Let the wolves sing at night
Let the moon tuck me in
Let the wind clear my sight
Let the rain cleanse my soul
Of regrets that I played it right
Regrets that I gave it all
The sky pours and rumbles
To tell me I am not alone
Telling me not fall and crumble
To stand and carry on
I am your doing
I am your creation
Reduce me to nothing but ruin
Leave nothing but the foundation
In solitude but not alone
And I’ll stand and carry on
©FAT 2015
shehannemoore said:
Lovely poem. Wonderful images conjured up.
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fais said:
thank you sweeeeetie xoxoxox
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MsTranquility said:
A wonderful and touching poem, Fais ❤
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fais said:
thank you dear glad u are around to read it
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MsTranquility said:
Thanks, and I am too! 🙂
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beingeternal said:
Beautiful and profound! Hope you are doing all well my dear friend.
Stay Blessed!
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fais said:
thank u dear been wondering where u been hiding, good to hear from ya
stay sweet
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beingeternal said:
Most Welcome! Was lost under the winter’s vast blanket. Walking the old path now. 🙂
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fais said:
softie :-p, welcome back its good to have u back lol unless u disappear with every season
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beingeternal said:
He He..:)
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B.G. Bowers said:
“Let the moon tuck me in” – love that image 😊
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fais said:
Thank u B.G flattered u had the time to read while entertaining the lil ones :-p
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B.G. Bowers said:
My pleasure, Fais. 😊
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john flanagan said:
As always, Fais, rich thought and fine expression.
Best wishes
john
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fais said:
Thank u john ur words ur visits always brightens my day
Best wishes and high regards
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Emy Will said:
Powerful words. Fais 🙂
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fais said:
Thank u dear emy 🙂 flattered. I admire ur work n regards to animal cruelty awareness xoxoxxo
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Christy Birmingham said:
Such motivating words, Fais! Great poem.
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fais said:
thank u dearest 🙂 glad u liked it , lol the comment came as i was posting something i was like omg Christy is fast xoxoxo
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AJ said:
What a piece of work Sir! Fabulous👏👏👏
Looking forward to read more from you…Best wishes
Regards
AJ
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fais said:
Thank you AJ glad u liked it and thanks for taking the time to read
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AJ said:
Pleasure was all mine.It was well rewarded my time that is😀
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